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Now that Tami has you thinking like an actor, let's take a step back and talk like directors.  Because as I have said too many times before, we are the creators of our stories, our characters.  Although we certainly hear our characters, we are the ones who place them in tight spots.  We create story.

I first found Lew Hunter's Screenwriting 434 in a bibliography.  I had just attended Robert McKee's lectures on Story.  Although I had no intention of writing a screenplay, I understood what a director's mind could add to my point of view and story telling abilities. A few years later, when I was writing my thesis, I found the citation and bought the book.  I am so happy I did.  Since then, I've recommended this book to all kinds of writers.

Because let's face it: this is about telling captivating, interesting stories.  For entertainment.  We write to be read.  The form doesn't really matter all that much.

I love this book for many reasons:

It is easy to read.  Unlike a lot of craft books, Lew Hunter's 434 reads like a great lecture.  He is often laugh-out-loud funny.  And smart.

On Where to Write:
When I'm developing a story, I like to use a pad and pencil so that process can occur in any invigorating place.
When I'm into script, I can write anywhere I happen to be.  I used to need every grain of sand in place on the Mojave Desert before I could get down to writing.  I then instructed my children, "When Daddy's writing, no one is to bother him unless they are on fire and can't beat out the flames with one hand."


The structure.  He takes us through the steps of writing a screenplay.  Ideas, the 2 minute movie (an exercise everyone should try), building characters, outlines, acts, and revision.  

And there is white space.

Great advice: new and old.
The book is full of great one liners and concepts.  From "kill your darlings" to fears and motivation, from petting the dog to talking heads, Hunter gives us everything we need.  He discusses conflict and the need for it, act twos (aka: the muddy middle) and surprising the viewer.  He compares drama to melodrama, believable unbelievability, open and closed stories.  he warns the writer not to be TOO brilliant. 

A snippet:


When you're trapped in the deepest story corner, rejoice.  THAT is when wonderful things can happen.  When you're in a corner, always look to your characters to lead you out.  They will show the way.

Another snippet:

I want you to spread your story and your characters before you as if you were to lift your intestines from your stomach and arrange them on a table.  Your guts, not anyone else's.  Get inside of yourself.  Pull things out.  DON'T BE SAFE. 

Please read Lew Hunter's Screenwriting 434.  It's a great book with a lot to say, told in an engaging style.  


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micolz
Jul. 28th, 2008 03:29 pm (UTC)
Thanks Sara! I'm working with Louise Hawes this semester at VCFA, and she recommended the book GETTING INTO CHARACTER, which seems to cover a lot of the same ground as far as the overlap between dramatic and narrative writing.
saraharonson
Jul. 28th, 2008 04:52 pm (UTC)
Lucky you!

I like GETTING INTO CHARACTER, too.

A lot of these books cover the same things--that's not a criticism. For me, it's the magic of hearing that old advice, just when you need it. And in regards to craft books, it's just about finding one that speaks in a way where you can hear the advice. And in an order that you can digest.

Have a great semester!!! (she writes, with jealousy!)

tamilewisbrown
Jul. 28th, 2008 07:37 pm (UTC)
Story as intestines... now that's advice I can use!

Seriously, story should come from deep inside us. And once you get it down, pulling it around and arranging it is what makes a great novel. There's also that image of examining the entrails as fortuneteller... I'm continually shocked as I delve deeper into my revisions about what I've hidden from myself inside my manuscript.

I'm going to order this book today.

Fabulous post, Sarah!
saraharonson
Jul. 28th, 2008 08:32 pm (UTC)
It's funny, isn't it? And reminds us to trust the unconscious.

Have fun reading!!
wordsrmylife
Jul. 28th, 2008 11:55 pm (UTC)
Great timing, Sarah. I was trying to figure out what book on screenplay writing I wanted to buy the other day in the big box and couldn't choose. I trust your advice, so next time I'm in town, Lew Hunter's the man.
saraharonson
Jul. 29th, 2008 11:50 am (UTC)
Hi Kathy,

When you have time, I'd love to hear what you are working on!
(Anonymous)
Jul. 29th, 2008 11:47 am (UTC)
movies and fiction
Netflix sent me the wonderful Danish movie, "After the Wedding" last week. Although I didn't entirely believe some of the characters' actions and reactions, I loved the movie anyway and watched the two interviews with the director that were included on the DVD. The analogy between the director editing and the novelist revising would help any writer. The director talks about her reasons for throwing out a charming scene that veered too off the through line. She talks about two scenes that do substantially the same thing and, though each scene is affecting, the way that the doubling dilutes the effect of both. She also talked about a wrenching scene that made a character's illness too explicit, when the audience already understood what was going on.

I enjoy dropping in here once in a while. I hope it's okay for me to post a response.

Best to all of you,
Jane (Resh Thomas)
saraharonson
Jul. 29th, 2008 11:54 am (UTC)
Re: movies and fiction
Hi Jane,

Of course it is okay for you to post!

Over and over again, I find that all writers--no matter what genre they are working in--have to go back to the very same basics: what serves the throughline, motivation, the darlings...trusting the reader...

I'll put After the Wedding on my netflix list.

Thanks!
scgreene
Jul. 29th, 2008 01:59 pm (UTC)
Re: movies and fiction
One thing I've realized in the past few years is that the more I learn about writing, the harder it is to watch a movie without analyzing the thing and pulling it apart. So many movies today try to fly on shoddy motivations, implausible action, and superficial plots. And characterization? Ha! Don't even think about it.

European movies have become more and more attractive as American actors and actresses have become nothing more than personalities. Give us some depth here, people. Screen writers, especially.
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